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Old 01-02-2014, 11:35 AM   #2
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I like this but Idk it seems sumthin' is missin...actually lackin' is probably a more appropriate word to use in this case.Alot of this read as very predictable, would have liked you to fuck with the scheme a little, Havin' said that I thought from the 'Jesus Christ line to the lions would do it' section is slick...don't think I've read anything' of yours before but yeah, I will in the future...rtf if you care to I'm not phased either way.

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