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Old 03-04-2013, 06:31 PM   #11
TYSON
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Crazy battle folks, crazy...
The writing ability is displayed excellent in both, making this a hard decision.

Innovator...while reading from the beginning it felt so gay lol. I didn't know what the hell was going on but as the story progressed I had to start over so I could read without feeling weirded out imo. Your imagery was spectacular for real. The direction u took this topic was nicely done.

Mic....excellent multis and rhyme scheme. Wasnt a dull moment from that aspect. The story was the only thing lacking for me. Yes direct but lacking in imagery. I felt u could of played with it more.

Overall INNOVATOR won this. Both came with it but his imagery was just on point and gripped me more. Great battle fellas.
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