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IN LOVE WITH A STRIPPER
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 3,967
Battle Record: 10-15
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Crazy battle folks, crazy...
The writing ability is displayed excellent in both, making this a hard decision. Innovator...while reading from the beginning it felt so gay lol. I didn't know what the hell was going on but as the story progressed I had to start over so I could read without feeling weirded out imo. Your imagery was spectacular for real. The direction u took this topic was nicely done. Mic....excellent multis and rhyme scheme. Wasnt a dull moment from that aspect. The story was the only thing lacking for me. Yes direct but lacking in imagery. I felt u could of played with it more. Overall INNOVATOR won this. Both came with it but his imagery was just on point and gripped me more. Great battle fellas. |
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