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Old 12-29-2013, 08:49 PM   #1
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Actively sharing vocabulary. Sentencing God.
Or pseudo empathetic nods made in reticent fog.
^ Dopeness!

And thanks to Certain for clearing up a few things, haha. Kinda tired so I didn't really give the verse itself the attention it deserved to fully understand it after just one read-through, I'll probably come back to give it a better read later on, if I got anything more to add I'll post it up. Either way I agree with Natural, been some time since I last read something by you (if you're Figurative) and I can definitely see improvement here. Cool shit.
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