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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
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Whose your ghostwriter? Is he a ghoul or goblin of sorts
a demon robbin' for sport, a man with a lot on his spork orrr...fork in the road, fork in the roast I'm done with idiocy Give me a minute for the gimme's that or deep within me I'm hitting critical critically, with a critic highfiving the gimmickry the mockery trying to mimic me when I'm off on epiphanies a mushroom run with Mario sipping the fire flower lighting up spiritually what do you want on your grave before I give it a spit and a pee whose your ghostwriter? Is he me? Can you see the injury... the harm it could cause you psychically oh...you hard bitch? I'm hard bitch, taking these children of the corn out for harvest ripping out their ears making them listen to me when I drop this I'm far from monogamous once I'm fucking every one of your mama's riding a Deloreon back and forth while you were listening to Aqua pretending your Ken will get you a dragon punch to the chin with the amber lamps rushing in taking you off to your dumpster kin whose your ghostwriter? does he peel under pressure, cucumber skin not much to mantra when you got no armor to protect that fuckers neck that's another verse you will ever touch again, whose your ghostwriter?
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Bam
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lmfao, i dunno exactly whats going on here, but this shit's cool
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nok Su kow
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That children of the corn line was mean
Lol amber lamps. The one fig quoted was oil slick as well. keep it coming
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Razor-thin derision
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Coolness. Has a personality to it.
"Whose your ghostwriter? Is he a ghoul or goblin of sorts" ^My favorite line of the piece. I thought you could've had better second-lines because set ups like this are gold. Keep doing you |
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V.V
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This was cool. I'm not gonna quote cuz everyone already did. This felt like a detour from the usual I read from you. But this was pretty dope. Keep doin yo thang.
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The Clown Prince
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Bam
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