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Old 09-08-2013, 04:38 AM   #1
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Let's hear the excuse, does the fear get to you? Is it spiritual?
Does the thought of you beating your kids get you hysterical?
Are you crying while reading this? Are you lonely and miserable?
Good, that's what you get for abandoning me, fuck civility
Soak up the humility, your feelings don't mean a damn to me
Your a practitioner of insanity, no bond, your not my family
Your a broke blonde, a disgrace to humanity, you chose wrong
A pipe, a line, a bong over your kids, your selfish as shit bitch
You should cross your legs, call for a doctor and have em stitch it
My words probably sound vicious, but you lost all six kids
Just like your whole family and friends probably predicted
Child protective services moved swiftly, or I'd be history
Another missing person, channel surfin unsolved mysteries
Luckily my dad is stand up, man enough to be a father
Suddenly I'm mad, your step mother to another daughter
Your a lost cause, meth addict, fuck it why even bother
It must be real easy for you to just be breezing on through
Your taken care of alright, by terrible guys, scary but true
They keep you high as a kite, why do you bear the abuse
Where is your pride? Self esteem too. Re married to lies
Amphetamine use. Dialated eyes, paranoia having ya hide
Griding of teeth. Dignity died. Blindly beleaves. She'll be alright
Society disagrees, felony ties. Family grieves, criminalized
Sympathy's weak, emotion just reek, so she cannabalized


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Old 12-27-2013, 07:21 AM   #2
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Old 12-27-2013, 05:28 PM   #3
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Old 12-27-2013, 07:05 PM   #4
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Lol. You hurting my feel feels
Guess I'll just kweep on prwhackticing




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Old 12-28-2013, 02:09 AM   #5
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i seen this earlier, i just never got the chance to give my take on it. first, i want to say that the content was a good read - it actually invoked anger in me, so that goes to show how effective it was. its like i could feel the struggle you were going through, your choice of words did a good job in really expressing your hate so i hope thats the message you were trying to get across.

Your taken care of alright, by terrible guys, scary but true
They keep you high as a kite, why do you bear the abuse
Where is your pride? Self esteem too. Re married to lies
Amphetamine use. Dialated eyes, paranoia having ya hide

this was the most fluid set of bars, you carried that shit through, and the best part about the whole drop in my eyes was the fact that it seemed effortless..whether thats the truth or not, it seemed like it.
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