Monster

Natural · 12-25-2013, 05:01 AM

Natural:
Ya'll know ima fuckin monster, time to get my feast on
All of ya'll are fucking goners, I'm cold as a keystone
If given the choice its beast mode, my fangs sank in each dome
No one here can even beat code, bitches choke like it's deep throat
The crime scene look like suicide, leave they album as the note
Malice intent bitch do or die, y'all gon reap what you sow
I'm a real killer commando, some have called me mad dog
Trust me if that was so, id throw these whack jobs off the lap top
Homie yappin with a glass jaw, reflecting that trash talk
I thrown one punch he passed on, six feet with a cracked stone
I'm the demon at you're damn feat when you're all passed out
Breathing in the ether from my last bout, got you gassed out
You dysfunctional pricks all soft bitch, no balls all clit
Fuckin pussies what I called ya, ya'll get beat when I brawl ya
Ball up and I'll roll ya down the road like a tire when I throttle
I'm the monster that'll take control of you're career and gobble

FR33KtheG33K · 12-25-2013, 05:23 PM

this shit was tits.. you seem a little angry man but i fucks with it, i feel sorry for the target of your wrath. anticipating the next drop, looking forward to seeing you exploring different areas, ima have to look through the threads and see if you have more.

Natural · 12-25-2013, 06:47 PM

I've got a few pieces. Type my name in search it should pull it up.
This is not a usual steeze for me to write in but i wanted to try something new. Either way appreciate the looks. I'll rtf when I have proper time to do so

dead man · 12-25-2013, 07:12 PM

wait I'm confused

are you codeman?

Natural · 12-25-2013, 07:18 PM

No. I'm natural.

Natural · 12-27-2013, 07:22 AM

Bump

Just Write · 12-27-2013, 09:06 AM

This was dope and more my style. Im into those aggressive spits and thats what this was. Straight down your throat nastiness. Middle section was my fav. Only thing i didnt like was the word gobble. Kinda felt out of place. Stay up

Natural · 12-27-2013, 09:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Just Write

This was dope and more my style. Im into those aggressive spits and thats what this was. Straight down your throat nastiness. Middle section was my fav. Only thing i didnt like was the word gobble. Kinda felt out of place. Stay up

Ha ha I agree with the word gobble actually.
Word.
Appreciate the looks.

12-25-2013, 05:01 AM	#1
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	Monster Natural: Ya'll know ima fuckin monster, time to get my feast on All of ya'll are fucking goners, I'm cold as a keystone If given the choice its beast mode, my fangs sank in each dome No one here can even beat code, bitches choke like it's deep throat The crime scene look like suicide, leave they album as the note Malice intent bitch do or die, y'all gon reap what you sow I'm a real killer commando, some have called me mad dog Trust me if that was so, id throw these whack jobs off the lap top Homie yappin with a glass jaw, reflecting that trash talk I thrown one punch he passed on, six feet with a cracked stone I'm the demon at you're damn feat when you're all passed out Breathing in the ether from my last bout, got you gassed out You dysfunctional pricks all soft bitch, no balls all clit Fuckin pussies what I called ya, ya'll get beat when I brawl ya Ball up and I'll roll ya down the road like a tire when I throttle I'm the monster that'll take control of you're career and gobble Last edited by Natural; 12-29-2013 at 12:39 AM.

12-25-2013, 05:23 PM	#2
FR33KtheG33K subterranean dweller Join Date: Dec 2013 Posts: 24 Rep Power: 0	this shit was tits.. you seem a little angry man but i fucks with it, i feel sorry for the target of your wrath. anticipating the next drop, looking forward to seeing you exploring different areas, ima have to look through the threads and see if you have more. __________________ Padded Room Diaries: Entry One. Entry Two, Genius vs. Insanity Margin scribble Entry Three: Sporadic thoughts. Entry 4: Bars Attacks Rebel Yell Series: Rebel Yell

12-25-2013, 07:12 PM	#4
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	wait I'm confused are you codeman? __________________ Zack Wicks for president

12-25-2013, 07:18 PM	#5
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	No. I'm natural. Last edited by Natural; 12-25-2013 at 07:21 PM.

12-27-2013, 09:06 AM	#7
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	This was dope and more my style. Im into those aggressive spits and thats what this was. Straight down your throat nastiness. Middle section was my fav. Only thing i didnt like was the word gobble. Kinda felt out of place. Stay up __________________

12-25-2013, 06:47 PM	#3
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	I've got a few pieces. Type my name in search it should pull it up. This is not a usual steeze for me to write in but i wanted to try something new. Either way appreciate the looks. I'll rtf when I have proper time to do so

12-27-2013, 07:22 AM	#6
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	Bump