AOWL WK 3: dead man (2-0) VS. pohfig (2-0) [POHFIG WINS, 5-4.]

Mike Wrecka · 03-04-2013, 12:06 AM

ya doin a quick vote here

deadman - incredible wording as usual. jumped into the topic quite well. was more of an overview and lacked emotion though. technically superior using an advanced rhyme scheme.

pohfig- good storytelling. didn't really hit the topic as well as I wanted it to. and the whole story seemed like its been done before. very good wording. an excellent verse overall.

vote - deadman

very close battle. hard to decide but I got black d here. two enjoyable reads.

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03-04-2013, 12:06 AM	#1
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	ya doin a quick vote here deadman - incredible wording as usual. jumped into the topic quite well. was more of an overview and lacked emotion though. technically superior using an advanced rhyme scheme. pohfig- good storytelling. didn't really hit the topic as well as I wanted it to. and the whole story seemed like its been done before. very good wording. an excellent verse overall. vote - deadman very close battle. hard to decide but I got black d here. two enjoyable reads. .