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Your rhyming has become more "conventional" and less sporadic since my last read.
Her hair's a bit longer, face a little less pretty, Just the grind of the somber middle-women of pity- Both in the city now, but she screamed beach weather, Something still the same, a familiar pressure <-- That segment was quite awesome! |
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