I just saw a bum wipe his ass with a Picasso drawing.

[big baby]

Originally Posted by big baby

Paragraph format was reminiscing, and had a bit of the flare some are used to the netcees user. but this also had a flare of wise ways. Nothing really quotable, except the part where you mention what your friends are doing. I wish it did, though it didn't need any, and neither do many pieces. You lit up the dark side of the room with this. Continue on.

I don't think most could tell I might have been inebriated.

This was good, and paragraph format isn't a genre of it's own but you expel things you usually structure in a stanza piece. Not saying you deprecate a certain value of literary writing, but mainly you focus on a precedent. In stanza you have the luxury of creating a certain finale, so to say to end your line. Where as in paragraph. that line can be a stream of consciousness. Less confined than when you do so in stanzas. It's a different set of mind @Certain, not a different way of writing. And that is the difference. My paragraph writings can be formatted into stanzas as well. It's also different for the reader, just as easily. Where a stanza, and the moments your eyes surface across from the end, to the beginning of the next line. It can be crucial in how one processes a individual line or concept. ... or not.

The lines vulgar quoted were good. I can see slight improvements.