AOWL Week 3 Chat & Predictions - Page 6

Inno · 03-02-2013, 12:49 AM

ama vote some more tomorrow.

good battles, thanks for the match MW

Vinzr · 03-02-2013, 02:34 AM

great to see lots of good feedback coming in. first topical verse i've written in a year.

im not even joking.

will get my voting swag on tomorrow

Split · 03-02-2013, 04:05 AM

I used know this woman, who had the most beautiful tattoos on the topsides of both of her hands,
She was 43 years old, and as far as I know, had never yet been with a man,
It's not that she wasn't attractive (she was beautiful) but it was the way that she interacted,
She was aggressively passive, to the point that she would have intimidated any man that ever tried to catch it,
On the right hand, she had the tattoo of a nude girl, she claimed it was what God resembled,
But on the left she had a mirrored image of the same female, and this one she explained look like the devil

dead man · 03-02-2013, 08:55 AM

Quote:

16 lines minimum, 32 lines maximum.

??????????
@pohfig

King Ra. · 03-02-2013, 09:11 AM

My apologies @Nigma. This week was a killer, I couldn't dedicate the time to put together a solid piece. I will give you your shine in the next mag homie.

King Ra. · 03-02-2013, 09:19 AM

Another note, extensions are always due Friday 11:59 PST, but I usually give you extra time. If I wake up Saturday morning & you've yet to post a verse, you get a no show L.
@Genocide I read your suggestion of altering the day match ups are set up & due. I'm going to post a thread for all participants to give their thoughts on what they feel & we'll see what happens from there.

Mac · 03-02-2013, 09:30 AM

@Dave @King Keith all cool i didnt even like the topic. my verse is abit rusty. i don't like winning from no-shows or DQs so take your time, dave.

King Ra. · 03-02-2013, 09:33 AM

Alright. He can't take his time- giving him one more hour & then I'm closing it.

Mac · 03-02-2013, 09:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by King Keith

Alright. He can't take his time- giving him one more hour & then I'm closing it.

okay, if he no-shows can you keep the battle open so people can feed my verse?

King Ra. · 03-02-2013, 09:41 AM

I feature no show verses in the mag every week. If anything, you could just post your verse in the Open Mic section for feed, or wait til the next edition of the mag to see some critique. @Mac

Mac · 03-02-2013, 09:46 AM

oh that's fine. i might post it at open mic. thanks

Witty · 03-02-2013, 10:43 AM

I only got 10 lines done, blanked out :( I was gonna post them, but I fell asleep, my bad.

Anyway, just so it doesn't go to waste lol -

Each day just rushes by, as hate decays in a lush's eye
His fate changed, now he's gotta make change - he's running dry
Some would try to use a gun, but he isn't scum, just drunk and shy
He begs for change, with a subtle sign claiming he's dumb and blind
Above, the sky has come alive, and he hates that the sun can shine
While he lays to waste, and craves the taste of some rum or wine
And prays that love will find a way to save his troubled mind
He waits for grace to display the rays that will break his sullen binds
And the rage that he keeps encased, in case its slumber dies
The drunkard spies his face in a puddle, grayed with sunken lines
He gets up, and sighs.

King Ra. · 03-02-2013, 12:19 PM

@Witty I am very disappointed in you & NYC, sir. I'm shocked you've both already no showed twice this season & you're both two of the best here in the league. Bad enough Cake no showed twice already in the first two weeks. What do you have to say for yourself?

Witty · 03-02-2013, 12:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by King Keith

@Witty I am very disappointed in you & NYC, sir. I'm shocked you've both already no showed twice this season & you're both two of the best here in the league. Bad enough Cake no showed twice already in the first two weeks. What do you have to say for yourself?

Word, it is my bad...I wrote what I could. I would have thrown up something if dude had shown but honestly I just went blank so it wouldn't have been the best I could do. No excuses though, sorry man.

King Ra. · 03-02-2013, 12:43 PM

If you want to make the playoffs, you better get it together, homie. Go drop a thought in the AOWL Discussion thread, then make your way to the dreaded corner.

Inno · 03-02-2013, 02:58 PM

I say make that nigga vote on ever single battle..

03-02-2013, 03:48 PM

Sry @Coup..i got stuck late @ work, and didnt have time to key, my b.

Pent uP · 03-02-2013, 03:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dead man

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@pohfig

Didnt see it. My bad. Super busy. Punish however

TYSON · 03-02-2013, 04:25 PM

I know I didn't come legit but vote NIGGAS

dead man · 03-02-2013, 04:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pohfig

Didnt see it. My bad. Super busy. Punish however

BAN PLZ

03-02-2013, 04:05 AM	#103
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	I used know this woman, who had the most beautiful tattoos on the topsides of both of her hands, She was 43 years old, and as far as I know, had never yet been with a man, It's not that she wasn't attractive (she was beautiful) but it was the way that she interacted, She was aggressively passive, to the point that she would have intimidated any man that ever tried to catch it, On the right hand, she had the tattoo of a nude girl, she claimed it was what God resembled, But on the left she had a mirrored image of the same female, and this one she explained look like the devil __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

03-02-2013, 10:43 AM	#112
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	I only got 10 lines done, blanked out :( I was gonna post them, but I fell asleep, my bad. Anyway, just so it doesn't go to waste lol - Each day just rushes by, as hate decays in a lush's eye His fate changed, now he's gotta make change - he's running dry Some would try to use a gun, but he isn't scum, just drunk and shy He begs for change, with a subtle sign claiming he's dumb and blind Above, the sky has come alive, and he hates that the sun can shine While he lays to waste, and craves the taste of some rum or wine And prays that love will find a way to save his troubled mind He waits for grace to display the rays that will break his sullen binds And the rage that he keeps encased, in case its slumber dies The drunkard spies his face in a puddle, grayed with sunken lines He gets up, and sighs. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

03-02-2013, 12:49 AM	#101
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	ama vote some more tomorrow. good battles, thanks for the match MW

03-02-2013, 02:34 AM	#102
Vinzr Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 86 Battle Record: 5-5 Rep Power: 137478	great to see lots of good feedback coming in. first topical verse i've written in a year. im not even joking. will get my voting swag on tomorrow

03-02-2013, 09:11 AM	#105
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	My apologies @Nigma. This week was a killer, I couldn't dedicate the time to put together a solid piece. I will give you your shine in the next mag homie.

03-02-2013, 09:19 AM	#106
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	Another note, extensions are always due Friday 11:59 PST, but I usually give you extra time. If I wake up Saturday morning & you've yet to post a verse, you get a no show L. @Genocide I read your suggestion of altering the day match ups are set up & due. I'm going to post a thread for all participants to give their thoughts on what they feel & we'll see what happens from there.

03-02-2013, 09:30 AM	#107
Mac Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 480 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 1856622	@Dave @King Keith all cool i didnt even like the topic. my verse is abit rusty. i don't like winning from no-shows or DQs so take your time, dave.

03-02-2013, 09:33 AM	#108
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	Alright. He can't take his time- giving him one more hour & then I'm closing it.

03-02-2013, 09:41 AM	#110
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	I feature no show verses in the mag every week. If anything, you could just post your verse in the Open Mic section for feed, or wait til the next edition of the mag to see some critique. @Mac

03-02-2013, 09:46 AM	#111
Mac Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 480 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 1856622	oh that's fine. i might post it at open mic. thanks

03-02-2013, 12:19 PM	#113
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	@Witty I am very disappointed in you & NYC, sir. I'm shocked you've both already no showed twice this season & you're both two of the best here in the league. Bad enough Cake no showed twice already in the first two weeks. What do you have to say for yourself?

03-02-2013, 12:43 PM	#115
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	If you want to make the playoffs, you better get it together, homie. Go drop a thought in the AOWL Discussion thread, then make your way to the dreaded corner.

03-02-2013, 02:58 PM	#116
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	I say make that nigga vote on ever single battle..

03-02-2013, 03:48 PM	#117
Rawn M.D. Guest Posts: n/a	Sry @Coup..i got stuck late @ work, and didnt have time to key, my b.

03-02-2013, 04:25 PM	#119
TYSON IN LOVE WITH A STRIPPER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,967 Battle Record: 10-15 Rep Power: 23089122	I know I didn't come legit but vote NIGGAS