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Old 12-18-2013, 09:51 AM   #1
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lars was always pretty mediocre but some people like oats like him
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Old 12-18-2013, 10:13 AM   #2
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...a retard, how?

At least I bothered to read and respond unlike most of the forum.

I could have been more indepth, but I was on the move at the time, just wanted to acknowledge Frank that I was still among the few reading.

The lines in this ARE long to me, I wasn't being an asshole, take a look at that shit for yourselves:

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A fat pudgy character with a mellow soft face - comes closer – with a severing scar,
...that's at least 22 syllables right there, it has to be, I haven't even counted but as someone who reacords - I keep my lines around 12-16 syllables. This couldn't be spat to a beat and flow unless Frank on his Twista shit, and lets be honest, he isn't. Neither is Geno. Gennie Weasley been on my dick ever since I called out his Harry Potter ass for being a wack faggot. Ain't nothing to see here. Frank is a good writer, the idea was cool, execution could have been... but some of them lines belong on Rap-Royalty somewhere or a gym, they're such a stretch. How you gonna have a line 20+ syllables long and only rhyme at the end of the line? It loses any semblance of flow, IN MY HONEST FUCKING OPINION.

I don't troll this side of the board, but I do keep it real. Call me what you like, but I'm my own man.

NYC taking sideswipes when he one of my biggest fans from his younger days. I see you, pussy. Always the contender, never the champ when it comes to these leagues gots to be tough, huh?

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