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Join Date: Jan 2013
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This was weird, but I liked it. It had a cinematic presentation, contained knowledge leaving me feeling like I learned some facts of life. Felt as though you progressively built momentum throughout the verse and my craving for a stellar ending was granted. The twist was presented really well and capped off the verse nicely. Well done, I rarely see your drops but when I do they always bring something creative and enjoyable
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