Beretta vs. megatron {Beretta wins}

Dominate · 03-01-2013, 03:58 PM

u ain't never touched a gun in ya life so u're not a crook clearly
but if u ever did.. u'd be Deadpool in a mag out faster than any comic book series
cool, wp is solid.
i'm a boss like Tony Soprano so the piece on my hip stays loaded w/ ammo
& i'm handin out headshots..
so when i pack the can, pop off a lid & leave ya Skoal open.. it ain't smokeless tobacco
the 'skoal' wp in itself was good but all the stuff that preceded it to try to beef up the wp actually detracted from it imo
Leatherface w/ metal blades, grab a knife & carve thru ya spleen
put ya organs inside of jars right after takin out ya Eisenhart like Luther P.
nice. never seen a Eisenhart line before
& ya bitch? i fucked her all in ya crib & left that wet snatch demolished
i'm talkin bedroom, livingroom, bathroom..
& there was enough Action in the kitchen to rival that chef/rapper Bronson's
had to google to get reference. The wp here wasn't as good but the punch was better. Decent
& fuck a gun, one swing'll smash this brittle fag's face in
i'll just snuff 'em w/ a fist full of rings.. & put more gold to his grill than Trinidad James's
okayyyyy... not bad but neither the punch or the wp did anything for me here
throw a right & K.O. this rookie cuz my hand's remarkable..
so if u thought i'd slack cuz u're Neutron.. irony, ya still gettin smashed to particles
good nameplay

good verse, solid wp throughout. Would like to see a bit more emphasis on punch concepts over "I'll kill you" ones, but this is a small thing.

You not built for this, young boy talkin big shit but he dumb frail
I mastered the art of battlin, here ur chances are slim, ill make him split wit one 12
cool personal. Seen slim lines a lot before, usually flipped with Eminem stuff... but the split with one 12 was highly relevant given that HE changed the amount you were gonna drop, so.... good
Don't ever tell this hoe some shit, cuz when he around the cops he can't close his lips
Yu can die quick bitch, no quidditch but its game over when I catch this golden snitch
seen exact same concept once before, sorry. I thought it was dope the first time but yeah... didn't have much impact a second time
I keep my Nina n we pull gory crimes, guns spit faster then Corey lines n destroy necks
The outcomes never Goodwin shorty shines, even his 40 times couldn't help u avoid death
OK wp concept. Having those multies compromised your wording here
Fool u ont pop tools, load glocks or hold chrome dezzies
Hoe stop u ont let off shots, if u got a Beretta then its an old Chevy
cool. Simple, but not bad.
I don't even have to spray heat, my squad deep and they stay killin
If he test me u Macy a parade of my dogs eatin this nigga like thanksgiving
nah seen a ton of macy lines before
You don't wanna box guy, I go ham after I down a gram of my spinach
If one land ur finished, I pop eyes n that a leave retina damaged condition
seen pop eyes lines before.... multies were good here

Got beretta taking this fairly comfortably with fresher wp and more creative lines generally

v/ Beretta

03-01-2013, 03:58 PM	#9
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,533 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197460	u ain't never touched a gun in ya life so u're not a crook clearly but if u ever did.. u'd be Deadpool in a mag out faster than any comic book series cool, wp is solid. i'm a boss like Tony Soprano so the piece on my hip stays loaded w/ ammo & i'm handin out headshots.. so when i pack the can, pop off a lid & leave ya Skoal open.. it ain't smokeless tobacco the 'skoal' wp in itself was good but all the stuff that preceded it to try to beef up the wp actually detracted from it imo Leatherface w/ metal blades, grab a knife & carve thru ya spleen put ya organs inside of jars right after takin out ya Eisenhart like Luther P. nice. never seen a Eisenhart line before & ya bitch? i fucked her all in ya crib & left that wet snatch demolished i'm talkin bedroom, livingroom, bathroom.. & there was enough Action in the kitchen to rival that chef/rapper Bronson's had to google to get reference. The wp here wasn't as good but the punch was better. Decent & fuck a gun, one swing'll smash this brittle fag's face in i'll just snuff 'em w/ a fist full of rings.. & put more gold to his grill than Trinidad James's okayyyyy... not bad but neither the punch or the wp did anything for me here throw a right & K.O. this rookie cuz my hand's remarkable.. so if u thought i'd slack cuz u're Neutron.. irony, ya still gettin smashed to particles good nameplay good verse, solid wp throughout. Would like to see a bit more emphasis on punch concepts over "I'll kill you" ones, but this is a small thing. You not built for this, young boy talkin big shit but he dumb frail I mastered the art of battlin, here ur chances are slim, ill make him split wit one 12 cool personal. Seen slim lines a lot before, usually flipped with Eminem stuff... but the split with one 12 was highly relevant given that HE changed the amount you were gonna drop, so.... good Don't ever tell this hoe some shit, cuz when he around the cops he can't close his lips Yu can die quick bitch, no quidditch but its game over when I catch this golden snitch seen exact same concept once before, sorry. I thought it was dope the first time but yeah... didn't have much impact a second time I keep my Nina n we pull gory crimes, guns spit faster then Corey lines n destroy necks The outcomes never Goodwin shorty shines, even his 40 times couldn't help u avoid death OK wp concept. Having those multies compromised your wording here Fool u ont pop tools, load glocks or hold chrome dezzies Hoe stop u ont let off shots, if u got a Beretta then its an old Chevy cool. Simple, but not bad. I don't even have to spray heat, my squad deep and they stay killin If he test me u Macy a parade of my dogs eatin this nigga like thanksgiving nah seen a ton of macy lines before You don't wanna box guy, I go ham after I down a gram of my spinach If one land ur finished, I pop eyes n that a leave retina damaged condition seen pop eyes lines before.... multies were good here Got beretta taking this fairly comfortably with fresher wp and more creative lines generally v/ Beretta