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12-13-2013, 10:12 PM
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Pretty cool. I prefer this to Frank's piece in the AOWL on Mandela. Good flow, nice rhymes. There were one or two spots where the multis didn't line up. This isn't usually a complaint of mine but I vaguely recall you being a stickler for such things. I hate centering of verses as well. But everything was on point here and the piece's purpose was served. Nice little lark.
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