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PancakeBrah · 12-13-2013, 09:14 PM

wowee zowee look at the words I know!

The use of purposefully inaccessible/remote vocabulary missed me. Usually it's a sign of trying way too hard but that wasn't the case here. I googled what I didn't know, you're very impressive with your words and stuff. Not really, seems kind of like a jerking off. Anyways, the flow/rhythm of this piece was silk. Looking past the vocab wanking; the schemes, "delivery", and flow was top notch here. Your use of grammar to impart your intended pace was great and a mark of a good writer. You know how to write, you're above the grade. I would prefer something more accessible from you but I enjoyed this in bunches despite my reservations in regards to your 'words! LOOK AT THE WORDS!!!' approach.

Dope.

12-13-2013, 09:14 PM	#1
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	wowee zowee look at the words I know! The use of purposefully inaccessible/remote vocabulary missed me. Usually it's a sign of trying way too hard but that wasn't the case here. I googled what I didn't know, you're very impressive with your words and stuff. Not really, seems kind of like a jerking off. Anyways, the flow/rhythm of this piece was silk. Looking past the vocab wanking; the schemes, "delivery", and flow was top notch here. Your use of grammar to impart your intended pace was great and a mark of a good writer. You know how to write, you're above the grade. I would prefer something more accessible from you but I enjoyed this in bunches despite my reservations in regards to your 'words! LOOK AT THE WORDS!!!' approach. Dope. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder