AOWL WK 3: zygote (1-0) VS. c.d.m. (0-2) [ZYGOTE WINS, 5-2.]

Mike Wrecka · 02-28-2013, 10:22 PM

dope battle. a very workable topic if you ask me.

zygote- damn that verse was insane. ridiculous even. you kept some multis going forever line after line which is really hard to do. sick word choice and rhyme scheme throughout. and stuck with the theme.

cdm- very nice verse man. I was wrong when I said you cant create an impressive flowing verse. this was it. it had everything. good read.

overall- cdm is doing everything right but keeps getting barely beat out. this week he posted a dope verse but zygotes was just better.

vote-zyg

02-28-2013, 10:22 PM	#1
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	dope battle. a very workable topic if you ask me. zygote- damn that verse was insane. ridiculous even. you kept some multis going forever line after line which is really hard to do. sick word choice and rhyme scheme throughout. and stuck with the theme. cdm- very nice verse man. I was wrong when I said you cant create an impressive flowing verse. this was it. it had everything. good read. overall- cdm is doing everything right but keeps getting barely beat out. this week he posted a dope verse but zygotes was just better. vote-zyg