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SYRACUSE
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,031
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V/ Pancake.
Cool vocab, good delivery and a sentimental twist where he went in a little more detail wise compared to other verses on similar topics. YDK you started strong and I actually liked the (a)pathetic thing you did there which I usually hate esp. in battles. Lots of good emotion, this would translate to audio far better than cake's. Actually I just spit both and I can deliver cake's in a dope manner as well but urs still flows better audio wise. Bottom line tho cake went in with the usual complexity and smooth delivery. |
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