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12-09-2013, 10:52 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2013
Posts: 1,170
Battle Record: 21-15
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@ Objective .. your verse was just disturbing .. the flow is fucking stretched & worded way to much .. it had me losing focus on what you where even trying to display .. like your rhyme schemes are fucking disgustingly bad rainbows of blood & flower buds i just an examply .. please dont take this as me hating because i dont know you but this was horrible in my opinion ... 3.5/10
vs @ Innovator But he deceives everyone including the children he watches Shows them the sport while he makes sport from his options ^decent attempt w/ wordplay But it turns out I was wrong in askin, see I wasn’t looking write Cuz the truth is, while I protected my son he was fucking my wife Nigga In a spandex suit with a fanny pack licking her poop shoot While im looking after my sons asshole this assholes sucking her asshole with a scoop? ^funny ending .. This was a little bit of a better read then Obj, but at the same time maybe it was just the topic, because neither showed any real writting talent incorporating a story w/ it & what not ... Vote- Inny |
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