Trust I can cuz I'm the fuckin man

ill nik-A · 11-27-2013, 10:13 PM

I gotta ghetto like stare
don't settle fights fair
some get the metal's bite there
not many fellow lives spared
The mental type's rare
with stories only rebel minds share
I'm The devil's nightmare
so why care?
my glare is the shining
axe In my hand
hope ure prepared for the grinding
relax this is planned
don't be scared of ur findings
it's so inviting
& the timing is perfect
the sun is shining
& the lighting shows purpose
Stop crying
why u so nervous?
Stop fighting
ur cries are so worthless
This is the end
Why can't u face it
Missing ur friends?
They lie in the basement
Give them a hand
Combined with ur bracelet.
My cut games lethal
Fuck the patriots
This blood stains' Tebow's
Some blame ego
How can u untrain evil?
It's just Fun games, people!
Like Russian roulette
Punch in ur neck
Cut ur tongue discussing respect
Dick thrusting ur ex
u Stiff fucking reject
Quit bugging she's ehh
I'm in a Bentley one three
Why waste my time to screw
u've got plenty to see
Whats a dime to u...
Is a penny to me
u act like Wendy's ain't cheap...
& Denny's elite
I'm in Prime one twelve
The tip alone buys many a feast
Find some help
Get ur man game right
Why u damn lames write?
Time won't tell
Since when did being the man...
shame whites?
seeing is believing
u act like breathing is achieving
I'll save my greeting for the evening
The sleeping for the mourning
The beatings for a warning
Killing genies for my needing
What I keep reading I'm not feeling
So I innovated
Flow right, simple greatest
Show why it's so hated

PancakeBrah · 11-27-2013, 10:46 PM

Links.

dull boy · 11-28-2013, 02:25 AM

Ya' know, you could get the same effect by writing in paragraphs and using proper punctuation. I don't think it really matter.

Baron Mynd · 11-28-2013, 04:40 AM

ill nik on his baron mynd rhyme-the-whole-bar shit

this is super hard to do, most here can't do it and many overlook whats being done

just thought i'd stop by to say I see you

this is what I've been doing lately, I find it more interesting thsn how I used to write, more challenging

shame most here cant appreciate it for what it is

Baron Mynd · 11-28-2013, 04:41 AM

lmao at claiming you innovated this style, I beat you to it, fucker haha!

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=33733

hit me back

Eviscerate · 12-05-2013, 03:00 PM

Good shit. no, for real.

faggot

Certain · 12-05-2013, 03:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Baron Mynd

lmao at claiming you innovated this style, I beat you to it, fucker haha!

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=33733

hit me back

Abolish was writing like this in 2000. You know that.

Wise Wiggles · 12-05-2013, 03:04 PM

This wasn't good though?

Certain · 12-05-2013, 03:08 PM

I mean, it was OK. ill nik-A is better than this or most of his verses in this format would indicate. The tightly compacted but simple rhymes coupled with awkward syllable stressing made it really choppy. The content was standard issue. But it obviously was a test piece, and I can appreciate that.

ill nik-A · 12-05-2013, 03:17 PM

This is a flex key people... Lol

11-27-2013, 10:13 PM	#1
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	Trust I can cuz I'm the fuckin man I gotta ghetto like stare don't settle fights fair some get the metal's bite there not many fellow lives spared The mental type's rare with stories only rebel minds share I'm The devil's nightmare so why care? my glare is the shining axe In my hand hope ure prepared for the grinding relax this is planned don't be scared of ur findings it's so inviting & the timing is perfect the sun is shining & the lighting shows purpose Stop crying why u so nervous? Stop fighting ur cries are so worthless This is the end Why can't u face it Missing ur friends? They lie in the basement Give them a hand Combined with ur bracelet. My cut games lethal Fuck the patriots This blood stains' Tebow's Some blame ego How can u untrain evil? It's just Fun games, people! Like Russian roulette Punch in ur neck Cut ur tongue discussing respect Dick thrusting ur ex u Stiff fucking reject Quit bugging she's ehh I'm in a Bentley one three Why waste my time to screw u've got plenty to see Whats a dime to u... Is a penny to me u act like Wendy's ain't cheap... & Denny's elite I'm in Prime one twelve The tip alone buys many a feast Find some help Get ur man game right Why u damn lames write? Time won't tell Since when did being the man... shame whites? seeing is believing u act like breathing is achieving I'll save my greeting for the evening The sleeping for the mourning The beatings for a warning Killing genies for my needing What I keep reading I'm not feeling So I innovated Flow right, simple greatest Show why it's so hated __________________ Grumpy old man.

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Eviscerate stokely carmichael of rap Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 144 Rep Power: 3155074	Good shit. no, for real. faggot __________________ i used to do that here..

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Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	I mean, it was OK. ill nik-A is better than this or most of his verses in this format would indicate. The tightly compacted but simple rhymes coupled with awkward syllable stressing made it really choppy. The content was standard issue. But it obviously was a test piece, and I can appreciate that. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

11-28-2013, 02:25 AM	#3
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,053 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	Ya' know, you could get the same effect by writing in paragraphs and using proper punctuation. I don't think it really matter.

11-28-2013, 04:40 AM	#4
Baron Mynd PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 285 Rep Power: 0	ill nik on his baron mynd rhyme-the-whole-bar shit this is super hard to do, most here can't do it and many overlook whats being done just thought i'd stop by to say I see you this is what I've been doing lately, I find it more interesting thsn how I used to write, more challenging shame most here cant appreciate it for what it is

11-28-2013, 04:41 AM	#5
Baron Mynd PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 285 Rep Power: 0	lmao at claiming you innovated this style, I beat you to it, fucker haha! http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=33733 hit me back

12-05-2013, 03:17 PM	#10
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	This is a flex key people... Lol __________________ Grumpy old man.