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Old 12-05-2013, 07:14 AM   #5
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STOP SLEEPING OM.


Insane, man, Boston bomber section woke me up. The Mormon section to the puffy suits bit was excellent, as well. Superb wording. HITMAN ART. U like Chance the Rapper? Listen to "Wasting Time- Kids These Days" srs go do it





















Your writing reminds me a bit of Chance's. Unorthodox/ playful rhyme patterns that relay an array of ideas, tropes, and idioms that constitute what could be called "Qwarterz' steez". Having read you on the old Netcees extensively and getting caught up now, while you seem to have loosened up a bit (like your approach) you've gotten technically better in leaps and bounds.


One of the most enjoyable reads in recent memory, keep keyin Q
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