Week 10 - VividlyVague (6-3) vs. Frank (6-3) - VIVIDLYVAGUE WINS 5-0

Adonis · 12-03-2013, 01:35 AM

Veevee - witty. Take on topic, the alien creator in the end but begining explaining an atom to bear. Before the reveal. Solid writing, but it was a story. Lyrically, weak, poor end rhymes often but didn't lack for content. that made it different but I didn't mind.

Franker- I like the approach because it was flex-esque, I guess the kids call it "swag and flow". Some parts came offf corny but not as many as I would think consider it was a mission read. I think it had a full paragraph of extra bits and pieaces that were not nnecessary.

This is a close bout because both did very well in some aspects. I did however enjjoy the take on topic as well as executed concept

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12-03-2013, 01:35 AM	#10
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	Veevee - witty. Take on topic, the alien creator in the end but begining explaining an atom to bear. Before the reveal. Solid writing, but it was a story. Lyrically, weak, poor end rhymes often but didn't lack for content. that made it different but I didn't mind. Franker- I like the approach because it was flex-esque, I guess the kids call it "swag and flow". Some parts came offf corny but not as many as I would think consider it was a mission read. I think it had a full paragraph of extra bits and pieaces that were not nnecessary. This is a close bout because both did very well in some aspects. I did however enjjoy the take on topic as well as executed concept Vote Vivid __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR