Week 10 - patrown (3-3) vs. Adonis (3-5) - PATROWN WINS 5-3

[Mr. J]

This was quite the battle of wits..so to speak
I feel both writers are of equal talent and think alike
Although outside of the arena show different tactical poise
I can see Adonis taking this at first until the end
there is this certain lag in his verse that seemed underdeveloped to end so abrupt
maybe its me and I don't quite "get" his take on the end
but it does seem bland nonetheless..not BAD if you think that's the case
just lacking the spark to the fire...nice flow to start though
pat, I could say I'm a fan of your work and that youtend to do well
but you also seem to lag it is on again of again. I feel mid verse recaptured what I would like to see
and it brpught your verse back to a shining moment of mediocrity
just kidding...but nicely done on your verse sir...papa likes
my vote on the other hand is tough to hand out
I feel both have done quite well with what they can do
and deserve a by...but that won't happen
honestly I'm gonna give this to patrown
his verse seemed to resonate more to me