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Old 12-02-2013, 07:32 PM   #9
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Gotta make this super short phone's dying...

Nigma - this was, well, not terrible, but, it wasn't quite spectacular in the lyrical department and I couldn't see how it relatexd to the topic. you had a couple nice lines, but it was a lot of meh, and a bit short

Mord - you're constantly improving, I was diggin the flow a lot, felt very audio. But rhyme wise it was sorta basic, hit the topic better than enigma, and overall more enjoyable to read
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