Who all on Netcees can write something using this scheme?

[Baron Mynd]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=35696

lets see what you've got

[Witty]

I can and i do.

[Just C]

Yeah, it's a piece of piss. I see you find it hard to do though.

[Answer]

To be honest, I don't see much content at all. It just looks like a string of arbitrary multis. I'd imagine that most online writers who have been doing this at least a year would be capable of that


The Inner Daemon piece was much better

[Seyance]

stfu just c, you are a terrible writer. baron is light years ahead of you.

don't rate that nika verse much either, but at least he's attempted something out of his comfort zone, some of it worked some didn't.

[ill nik-A]

Originally Posted by Answer

To be honest, I don't see much content at all. It just looks like a string of arbitrary multis. I'd imagine that most online writers who have been doing this at least a year would be capable of that


The Inner Daemon piece was much better

Who are u?

[Just C]

Originally Posted by Seyance

stfu just c, you are a terrible writer. baron is light years ahead of you.

don't rate that nika verse much either, but at least he's attempted something out of his comfort zone, some of it worked some didn't.

I'm light years ahead of you you 30 year old skate gear wearing faggot.

[Baron Mynd]

Any links to some Just C pieces around here?

[Seyance]

dunno, only verse I ever read from him was vs me and he got stomped 5-0 by a quick key.

[Baron Mynd]

lmao I only just remembered he's from letsqueef.com

long time no see, faggot :)

[Wise Wiggles]

That link is laughable.

Nice troll, bud.

[Answer]

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

Who are u?

Does it matter who I am? I'm just stating the truth. I started doing text in like 2001 when I was 12 years old. The first thing most people learn when they're new to writing and join a forum is multiple syllable rhyming. Even in 2001, there were people that had been using multiple syllable rhymes for years - you can find logs from AIM Chats where they're using multis in like 97, 98

So do the math, I'm sure plenty of those people still write. Whether or not they're still on Forums, who knows - but they've been writing consistently with multis for 15+ years. Do you really think they're gonna have a hard time constructing a a verse full of them?

We're at the point in the game where even the worst lyricists in the game (e.g. 2 Chainz) use multis

I'm sure you're a talented writer. But at the end of the day, you aren't saying anything in that verse. There's no wordplay the flexes your writing skills, and little to no imagery.

The only things even quotable in that entire verse is the "whats a dime to you is a penny to me" which is extremely simplistic and the tebow line that's random as fuck and makes no sense

[ill nik-A]

Originally Posted by Answer

Does it matter who I am? I'm just stating the truth. I started doing text in like 2001 when I was 12 years old. The first thing most people learn when they're new to writing and join a forum is multiple syllable rhyming. Even in 2001, there were people that had been using multiple syllable rhymes for years - you can find logs from AIM Chats where they're using multis in like 97, 98

So do the math, I'm sure plenty of those people still write. Whether or not they're still on Forums, who knows - but they've been writing consistently with multis for 15+ years. Do you really think they're gonna have a hard time constructing a a verse full of them?

We're at the point in the game where even the worst lyricists in the game (e.g. 2 Chainz) use multis

I'm sure you're a talented writer. But at the end of the day, you aren't saying anything in that verse. There's no wordplay the flexes your writing skills, and little to no imagery.

The only things even quotable in that entire verse is the "whats a dime to you is a penny to me" which is extremely simplistic and the tebow line that's random as fuck and makes no sense

Too long to read just thought u were an alias

Smh

[PancakeBrah]

Chance the Rapper is too good, bros.

[Brian Bryan]

as much as I hate playing gossip girl around here, i'm pretty sure Answer was talking shit about how wack he thought ill nik-A was and how his recent 'in the hood' line from a picture battle with Neighbor was and how Neigh was so much better and how he had no idea why nik-a was so revered over here in their chatroom so's to keep it off their forum where it might have been viewed by nik

@Answer @Phuck Yew @ill nik-A @Baron Mynd to thread for confirmation plz

[Just C]

It fucking better had been a quick key. But who cares about exerting yourself when the NC community will gladly let you rest on your laurels.

[Pent uP]

Have done it...against nik I think

[Certain]

None of you can match RIKOSHAY:

The canvas cries for nourishment
The tantalizing surface’s expanse invites the purest prints
I can’t describe the fervent lift a can of Krylon bursting gives.
My blast provides affirmative enhancement. I’m a muralist.
I handle mine with verve and grit to satirize a certain niche,
romanticize eternal bliss and advertise my fertile wit.
The standard’s high so first I sit and analyze the curves and dips.
It’s massive size. it’s girth ‘n width, demanding vibrant flourishes
I ran the lines to perfect pitch then scanned, with pride, my workmanship.
My status sign is pertinence.
The candid eye confirms my gift.
The canvas cries for nourishment.
Let passers-by interpret it
or classify it’s service if it pacifies their nervous twitch.
“To vandalize is purposeless and random crime’s the worst there is.”
My task defies their search for quips.
The fact is, life‘s a tournament.
The phantom prize is permanence but hands of time are merciless.
Some strategize to earn a win, I’m satisfied to skirt the fringe.
The canvas cries for nourishment.
A grand design emerges when my fancy flight is turbulent.
I travel light. I’m burdenless.
I’ve cast aside my hurt’s abyss, abandoned pride, deserted whims
and sacrificed superlatives to channel tides that surge within.
The passage rites I’ve earned are mixed.
My plans rely on earnestness
while asking why we burn a bridge when gaps divide the earth to bits.
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Held captive by conservatives whose appetites are murderous.
While “acting” right, we’re spurred to live in black ‘n white discursiveness.
Our savage plight’s preserved in brick walls stacked to heights that flirt with myth.
The canvas cries for nourishment,
it’s asinine to spurn it’s wish.
Prepackaged idol surrogates are past their primes and term limits.
I mastermind the terminus.
No last goodbyes when words are minced.
My passion rises. Courage whips and magnifies my urge to script.
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I brandish lightning sure and quick.
This tag defines my personage.
My chance to shine is worth the risk.
The canvas cries for nourishment.

[Pent uP]

I did a 64 line verse with a different scheme but it came out nowhere as good as that...I could possibly do that now. ..maybe for my next open mic hmhmhmh

[Split]

^sounds like a souless cakebrah