08-26-2013, 04:05 PM | #1 |
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Phuck Yew Vs R!can(Pic Battle) - PHUCK WINS
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08-27-2013, 02:41 AM | #2 |
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Check. Ill post a pic tomorrow or later when I wake up lol
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08-28-2013, 11:59 AM | #3 |
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20lines kept writting. @R!canTheoryz how you gon' win when, your styles a wreck, if your driven for success im bettin' you'l crash fam, your punches are emptier then that pocket you keep checkin' for cash kids like 30 still rocking the clothes that your brother gave you in this battle Phucks ruining your face, like the way ur mother made you thats a straight style.. from the looks of a broke lazy thug wearing his im over 21 Bracelet posted infront of the all ages club your cheeks are chunky fam, grandma probably loves to grab them twice we wake up w/ sand in our eyes, this fat fuck wakes up w/ bags of rice to me R!can your past is history, re-running the old shit isnt me this battle'l have you hiding quicker then that finger so mom didnt see if this was for the dough, id win by landslide & let you keep the money so you can buy some new J's, cause those look like Nik A's from when he was 20 pay for a haircut fam, you should really let the barber have'a whack but if i catch you Hangin Over Ear, i'l have no choice but to have you Capped my punches will weather your body, enough the arm might bolt ya you be shine'n hard i bet, w/ Grease on ur forehead that could ft. John Travoltta these fist are fast they Speed,Stick... but isnt your degree the same one? R!can's been in the Pit of his career, atleast we know were he got the name came from make'n guap for scripture, im at the club why'lin poppin' liquor he's outside the club pissed off cause his only ride there was his pops & sister Last edited by KwaL!ty; 08-30-2013 at 12:24 PM. |
08-30-2013, 03:53 PM | #4 |
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Listen,
Fat punk A diet is not a option the fridge reads proceed w/ cation, I See no family pictures of you hanging so that clearly means that this faggot is adopted. Nobody Hangs wit u pussy watch how Im Smashing this bear Cuz in 10 seconds thats the same wooden chair imma remove from Under ur legs while Ur gasping for air. U gayer than a fruit skittle. Faker than a fitness coach cuz this Dude little, FatAss "posing like that for a pic"is the closes you'll ever be to holding two pistols. U gave up on Lifting nights where ur mouths been Shifted right, Cuz You got enough drywall set up there to put a virgin thru any type of demolition site. We all know u dont get laid so stop ya Violent moves, The closes u been to pussy is cleaning that liter box stand u have sitting in the dining room. U Lick ur fingers on Another Quickness youve officially became a Slaughter witness, Cuz if u walked around shirtless there'd be enough rolls stored away to put Krispy Kreme outta business These personals are true im tired already so i continue to Bust em Worthwhile, Cuz the hair on ur chin just matched up to like 20 different Muslim pedophiles. I give em a Foolish stare cuz people think this Dude is fair? Son The patch on ur chin hasn't seen a razor since a virgin first starting shaving there pubic hair. Poor faggot imma boil ur fatass wit such a Drastic temperature Let me guess u went all out on buying the house but filled the living room up with cheap plastic furniture. Listen Chubbs. i believe i know you Very well enough to actually scare u hell, Cuz U look like the type of fat kid to jump into a tub full of hot fudge n Caramel. |
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open for votes..
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09-03-2013, 04:10 PM | #7 |
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your styles a wreck, if your driven for success im bettin' you'l crash
fam, your punches are emptier then that pocket you keep checkin' for cash your cheeks are chunky fam, grandma probably loves to grab them twice we wake up w/ sand in our eyes, this fat fuck wakes up w/ bags of rice vs U gayer than a fruit skittle. Faker than a fitness coach cuz this Dude little, FatAss "posing like that for a pic"is the closes you'll ever be to holding two pistols. U gave up on Lifting nights where ur mouths been Shifted right, Cuz You got enough drywall set up there to put a virgin thru any type of demolition site. These personals are true im tired already so i continue to Bust em Worthwhile, Cuz the hair on ur chin just matched up to like 20 different Muslim pedophiles. blah this was a hard battle to get through, phuck was hella statementish. bags of rice was easily lotb but thats all he really had that stuck out.. rican was more direct but his wording an execution was pretty horrible but still had enough little jabs to edge the win. |
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Place is horrid for votes lately... but Im back to give to drop some honest shit on all open battles from here on out!
how you gon' win when, your styles a wreck, if your driven for success im bettin' you'l crash fam, your punches are emptier then that pocket you keep checkin' for cash Basic opener, effective but simple kids like 30 still rocking the clothes that your brother gave you in this battle Phucks ruining your face, like the way ur mother made you Not really feeling this tbh..generic thats a straight style.. from the looks of a broke lazy thug wearing his im over 21 Bracelet posted infront of the all ages club Observant but its just not strong your cheeks are chunky fam, grandma probably loves to grab them twice we wake up w/ sand in our eyes, this fat fuck wakes up w/ bags of rice made me chuckle... good punch and was funny.. Good shit to me R!can your past is history, re-running the old shit isnt me this battle'l have you hiding quicker then that finger so mom didnt see I get it, however, simple... decent at best if this was for the dough, id win by landslide & let you keep the money so you can buy some new J's, cause those look like Nik A's from when he was 20 Get the concept, cool, fresh, I like it pay for a haircut fam, you should really let the barber have'a whack but if i catch you Hangin Over Ear, i'l have no choice but to have you Capped Okay at best, attempt at creativity. my punches will weather your body, enough the arm might bolt ya you be shine'n hard i bet, w/ Grease on ur forehead that could ft. John Travoltta Dig the concept and was creative, but its just statement here. these fist are fast they Speed,Stick... but isnt your degree the same one? R!can's been in the Pit of his career, atleast we know were he got the name came from Just me or is wording weird here? Not feeling make'n guap for scripture, im at the club why'lin poppin' liquor he's outside the club pissed off cause his only ride there was his pops & sister Not really feeling..similar concepts above.. Overall... you had some decent hits, however, your wording was off in some areas and not to mention some felt statement rather than punch. Decent showing here Listen, Fat punk A diet is not a option the fridge reads proceed w/ cation, I See no family pictures of you hanging so that clearly means that this faggot is adopted. Decent opener here.. Wording though is awkward Nobody Hangs wit u pussy watch how Im Smashing this bear Cuz in 10 seconds thats the same wooden chair imma remove from Under ur legs while Ur gasping for air. Not really strong in my opinion U gayer than a fruit skittle. Faker than a fitness coach cuz this Dude little, FatAss "posing like that for a pic"is the closes you'll ever be to holding two pistols. Cool little flip here.. decent hit U gave up on Lifting nights where ur mouths been Shifted right, Cuz You got enough drywall set up there to put a virgin thru any type of demolition site. lol.... this was a good bar here to be honest. Good flip We all know u dont get laid so stop ya Violent moves, The closes u been to pussy is cleaning that liter box stand u have sitting in the dining room. Decent shit here as well.. next time work on wording (closest) U Lick ur fingers on Another Quickness youve officially became a Slaughter witness, Cuz if u walked around shirtless there'd be enough rolls stored away to put Krispy Kreme outta business Krispy Kreme i think of donuts.. not rolls... get concept but not strong These personals are true im tired already so i continue to Bust em Worthwhile, Cuz the hair on ur chin just matched up to like 20 different Muslim pedophiles. Decent creativity here.. decent hit I give em a Foolish stare cuz people think this Dude is fair? Son The patch on ur chin hasn't seen a razor since a virgin first starting shaving there pubic hair. I get the concept decent shit... seems a little stretch Poor faggot imma boil ur fatass wit such a Drastic temperature Let me guess u went all out on buying the house but filled the living room up with cheap plastic furniture. No.. just not feeling here Listen Chubbs. i believe i know you Very well enough to actually scare u hell, Cuz U look like the type of fat kid to jump into a tub full of hot fudge n Caramel. Just got lazy on the closer I see here.. get concept but slacked You need to work on some wording issues Rican. You have some good lines here and there.. concepts are good for most part, however, you slack towards end. Overall Vote: Rican for a little better hits. It was a decent battle but both need to work on wording and Phuck just came a little slightly indirect and statmentish on lines.
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Appreciate the feedback sir ^ 2-0 Bump
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09-10-2013, 10:29 PM | #11 |
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rican just dont have the concepts at all to go blows in this battle phuck took it easy.. had some dope shit, litterrally lold at thats a straight style.. from the looks of a broke lazy thug wearing his im over 21 Bracelet posted infront of the all ages club v-phuck gotta get your creative side in tune @rican
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10-15-2013, 01:23 PM | #12 |
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Wasn't feeling rican Verse, there's no harder hitters need to work on Creativity.
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10-16-2013, 01:43 PM | #13 |
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phuck had some lulz in his lines compared to ricans tbh, rican didnt really come off with good wording imo the two pistols was decent but thats it to me. phuck had a cpl zingers to me that were just all around better worded and funnier to me
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3-2 uppin will return favor if vote.
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10-22-2013, 11:12 AM | #15 |
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kids like 30 still rocking the clothes that your brother gave you
in this battle Phucks ruining your face, like the way ur mother made you your cheeks are chunky fam, grandma probably loves to grab them twice we wake up w/ sand in our eyes, this fat fuck wakes up w/ bags of rice my punches will weather your body, enough the arm might bolt ya you be shine'n hard i bet, w/ Grease on ur forehead that could ft. John Travoltta vs U gave up on Lifting nights where ur mouths been Shifted right, Cuz You got enough drywall set up there to put a virgin thru any type of demolition site. U Lick ur fingers on Another Quickness youve officially became a Slaughter witness, Cuz if u walked around shirtless there'd be enough rolls stored away to put Krispy Kreme outta business I felt like a few Rican's lines were pretty played e.g. the Pussy/Cat litter line. But he also had a few lines that were just too simple, like the fudge and caramel line. Phuck also had a couple lines that were too simple like the pops and sister line, but he had some witty ones as well. The grease line made me chuckle a little. I also felt like phuck's overall wording just had a bit more of a sting to it than some of rican's Vote - Phuck |
10-22-2013, 11:37 AM | #16 |
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3-2 phuck, first to 5, win by two
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11-09-2013, 05:58 PM | #17 |
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my punches will weather your body, enough the arm might bolt ya
you be shine'n hard i bet, w/ Grease on ur forehead that could ft. John Travoltta vs U Lick ur fingers on Another Quickness youve officially became a Slaughter witness, Cuz if u walked around shirtless there'd be enough rolls stored away to put Krispy Kreme outta business These personals are true im tired already so i continue to Bust em Worthwhile, Cuz the hair on ur chin just matched up to like 20 different Muslim pedophiles. This shit was boring. nothing made me laugh, nothing made me say wow, etc. The lines I quoted above are the only ones I found somewhat entertaining and creative, s I guess Rican wins. V = Rican |
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^wtf who is this 17 poster ...
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your styles a wreck, if your driven for success im bettin' you'l crash
fam, your punches are emptier then that pocket you keep checkin' for cash ^nah kids like 30 still rocking the clothes that your brother gave you in this battle Phucks ruining your face, like the way ur mother made you ^lol thats a straight style.. from the looks of a broke lazy thug wearing his im over 21 Bracelet posted infront of the all ages club ^meh your cheeks are chunky fam, grandma probably loves to grab them twice we wake up w/ sand in our eyes, this fat fuck wakes up w/ bags of rice ^roflz to me R!can your past is history, re-running the old shit isnt me this battle'l have you hiding quicker then that finger so mom didnt see ^no if this was for the dough, id win by landslide & let you keep the money so you can buy some new J's, cause those look like Nik A's from when he was 20 ^meh pay for a haircut fam, you should really let the barber have'a whack but if i catch you Hangin Over Ear, i'l have no choice but to have you Capped ^blah my punches will weather your body, enough the arm might bolt ya you be shine'n hard i bet, w/ Grease on ur forehead that could ft. John Travoltta ^played these fist are fast they Speed,Stick... but isnt your degree the same one? R!can's been in the Pit of his career, atleast we know were he got the name came from ^wat make'n guap for scripture, im at the club why'lin poppin' liquor he's outside the club pissed off cause his only ride there was his pops & sister ^roflzzz vs Fat punk A diet is not a option the fridge reads proceed w/ cation, I See no family pictures of you hanging so that clearly means that this faggot is adopted. ^weak Nobody Hangs wit u pussy watch how Im Smashing this bear Cuz in 10 seconds thats the same wooden chair imma remove from Under ur legs while Ur gasping for air. ^no U gayer than a fruit skittle. Faker than a fitness coach cuz this Dude little, FatAss "posing like that for a pic"is the closes you'll ever be to holding two pistols. ^ok U gave up on Lifting nights where ur mouths been Shifted right, Cuz You got enough drywall set up there to put a virgin thru any type of demolition site. ^lolwat We all know u dont get laid so stop ya Violent moves, The closes u been to pussy is cleaning that liter box stand u have sitting in the dining room. ^meh U Lick ur fingers on Another Quickness youve officially became a Slaughter witness, Cuz if u walked around shirtless there'd be enough rolls stored away to put Krispy Kreme outta business ^lol ok These personals are true im tired already so i continue to Bust em Worthwhile, Cuz the hair on ur chin just matched up to like 20 different Muslim pedophiles. ^nah I give em a Foolish stare cuz people think this Dude is fair? Son The patch on ur chin hasn't seen a razor since a virgin first starting shaving there pubic hair. ^weak Poor faggot imma boil ur fatass wit such a Drastic temperature Let me guess u went all out on buying the house but filled the living room up with cheap plastic furniture. ^no Listen Chubbs. i believe i know you Very well enough to actually scare u hell, Cuz U look like the type of fat kid to jump into a tub full of hot fudge n Caramel. ^wtf weak first off yall look like brothers seriously or like cousins or some shit. this battle was weak i expected more from both but i think phuck edged it no real lotb though but its w/e vote - phuck yew |
11-25-2013, 08:56 AM | #20 |
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how you gon' win when,
your styles a wreck, if your driven for success im bettin' you'l crash fam, your punches are emptier then that pocket you keep checkin' for cash Statement, not really effective tbh. kids like 30 still rocking the clothes that your brother gave you in this battle Phucks ruining your face, like the way ur mother made you this was an ok bar. thats a straight style.. from the looks of a broke lazy thug wearing his im over 21 Bracelet posted infront of the all ages club ehhh statementish....somewhat landed your cheeks are chunky fam, grandma probably loves to grab them twice we wake up w/ sand in our eyes, this fat fuck wakes up w/ bags of rice Nice to me R!can your past is history, re-running the old shit isnt me this battle'l have you hiding quicker then that finger so mom didnt see wasn't really feeling it. Perhaps I'm missing something here. if this was for the dough, id win by landslide & let you keep the money so you can buy some new J's, cause those look like Nik A's from when he was 20 pretty decent here, keepin the jab consistency going. pay for a haircut fam, you should really let the barber have'a whack but if i catch you Hangin Over Ear, i'l have no choice but to have you Capped ehhhh. my punches will weather your body, enough the arm might bolt ya you be shine'n hard i bet, w/ Grease on ur forehead that could ft. John Travoltta This one was funny. A bit awkward but humorous, definitely. these fist are fast they Speed,Stick... but isnt your degree the same one? R!can's been in the Pit of his career, atleast we know were he got the name came from Another humorous jab, nothing crazy. make'n guap for scripture, im at the club why'lin poppin' liquor he's outside the club pissed off cause his only ride there was his pops & sister weak closer. Vs. Listen, Fat punk A diet is not a option the fridge reads proceed w/ cation, I See no family pictures of you hanging so that clearly means that this faggot is adopted. It really doesn't though. Too statementish. Nobody Hangs wit u pussy watch how Im Smashing this bear Cuz in 10 seconds thats the same wooden chair imma remove from Under ur legs while Ur gasping for air. Another statement. U gayer than a fruit skittle. Faker than a fitness coach cuz this Dude little, FatAss "posing like that for a pic"is the closes you'll ever be to holding two pistols. Good . U gave up on Lifting nights where ur mouths been Shifted right, Cuz You got enough drywall set up there to put a virgin thru any type of demolition site. Good. We all know u dont get laid so stop ya Violent moves, The closes u been to pussy is cleaning that liter box stand u have sitting in the dining room. Decent here. U Lick ur fingers on Another Quickness youve officially became a Slaughter witness, Cuz if u walked around shirtless there'd be enough rolls stored away to put Krispy Kreme outta business Wasn't feeling this. These personals are true im tired already so i continue to Bust em Worthwhile, Cuz the hair on ur chin just matched up to like 20 different Muslim pedophiles. Humorous line here, nothing spectacular I give em a Foolish stare cuz people think this Dude is fair? Son The patch on ur chin hasn't seen a razor since a virgin first starting shaving there pubic hair. Wording was awkward at the end, good concept, landed somewhat Poor faggot imma boil ur fatass wit such a Drastic temperature Let me guess u went all out on buying the house but filled the living room up with cheap plastic furniture. ehhh. Listen Chubbs. i believe i know you Very well enough to actually scare u hell, Cuz U look like the type of fat kid to jump into a tub full of hot fudge n Caramel. Wasn't feeling it. Overall, I had Phuck Yew taking it. Both had equally weak openers and closers. I felt Phuck had a better closer and more good/decent hits throughout with the John travolta,bags of rice, armpit, and nika bars, which had a bit more sting vs. ricans pistols, demolition, pussy, and krispy kreme. So MVGT Phuck Yew for more consistency, a few better punches, more creativity, and not to mention a better flow/structure. Last edited by CymbiCort; 11-25-2013 at 08:59 AM. |
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