Week 9 - Mike Wrecka (4-4) vs. patrown (3-2) - MIKE WRECKA WINS 9-0

Zen · 11-24-2013, 06:45 PM

Patrown: I think the use of language was very nice when comparing the person to a tree. There were a few particular examples of that that I'd quote but on my vote do I can't. Besides that, this was good but not up to what I expect from you. I saw you say you were pressed for time in the predictions so I get that because I was the sane way this week lol.

Mike: You didn't need to do much this week in order to beat patrown because his piece was short and rushed, but you did enough. The flow was good as was the story. The standout of this though was your use of descriptive language. Very nice. Possibly could be VOTW but I haven't read the other battles yet.

V/Mike

11-24-2013, 06:45 PM	#1
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Patrown: I think the use of language was very nice when comparing the person to a tree. There were a few particular examples of that that I'd quote but on my vote do I can't. Besides that, this was good but not up to what I expect from you. I saw you say you were pressed for time in the predictions so I get that because I was the sane way this week lol. Mike: You didn't need to do much this week in order to beat patrown because his piece was short and rushed, but you did enough. The flow was good as was the story. The standout of this though was your use of descriptive language. Very nice. Possibly could be VOTW but I haven't read the other battles yet. V/Mike