WK2: dead man (1-0) VS. Nigma (1-0) [DEAD MAN WINS, 6-0.]

Pent uP · 02-25-2013, 09:08 AM

Nigma, flow was a cool off que read, but easy to follow and really nicely narrated. I actually recently start learning more about the templars and masons and hiram abif, but I have no idea what hiram abif has to do with a childs imagination.... ur narration followed it more tho and it was a good read. A lot of nice imagery displayed

Dead man, a lot of great lines throughout. Consistent flow for a smooth read and kept that content moving. The use of the dolphin metaphor was kinda cool and kept me interested for a while to see where it as going. It didn't go where I thought, which was actually even more cool... you kept giving me surprises in the strcuture and the ending was dope. The flow got even better towards the end and put it all together nicely.

Vote dead man

02-25-2013, 09:08 AM	#13
Pent uP Robin Williams of Fallen Victims Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,499 Battle Record: 25-11 Accomplishments - NC Hall of Fame Champed - Netcees Writers League (2x) - NWL Season 1 - Write Night I - Art of Writing League (2x) - Write Week IV Rep Power: 6862275	Nigma, flow was a cool off que read, but easy to follow and really nicely narrated. I actually recently start learning more about the templars and masons and hiram abif, but I have no idea what hiram abif has to do with a childs imagination.... ur narration followed it more tho and it was a good read. A lot of nice imagery displayed Dead man, a lot of great lines throughout. Consistent flow for a smooth read and kept that content moving. The use of the dolphin metaphor was kinda cool and kept me interested for a while to see where it as going. It didn't go where I thought, which was actually even more cool... you kept giving me surprises in the strcuture and the ending was dope. The flow got even better towards the end and put it all together nicely. Vote dead man