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11-20-2013, 06:30 PM
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Master of Beastiality
Join Date: Sep 2013
Location: Lansing, Mi
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That was fairly enlightening with the dialogue breakdown, I always try to avoid speaking dialogue for the most part, the few times I have I made it as a person purposely rhyming, having them sing/recite poetry in the piece, but, I just may try to implement some of those points in the future now
And damn it mike, it wasn't a baby! It was a toddler! |
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