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11-19-2013, 12:46 PM
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Arm the Homeless
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This was fuckin ill. Especially the Hart lines, that shit was definitely fuckin sick. All in all, good flow with some excellent wording with the syllable count and what not. Precise. Pretty dope here man. I'd leave better feed but I'm stoned :(
Feed here would be mucho appreciated: http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=33284 |
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