Week 8 - Vulgar (3-2) vs. Mr. J (5-2) - VULGAR WINS 6-3

patrown · 11-18-2013, 02:56 AM

vulgar - powerful stuff. you really hit the topic well here. i also thought you developed each character very effectively for how short each stanza was. impressive piece.

mr. j - your approach is admirable. really focused into the characters mind. also some good mechanics. in the end i wanted a little more understanding, but i was satisifed and can say this was a good read.

/v vulgar - i feel he hit the topic more efficiently, and i also enjoyed his verse a bit more.

11-18-2013, 02:56 AM	#14
patrown ‹^›ô¿ô‹^› Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 596 Battle Record: 13-19 Rep Power: 0	vulgar - powerful stuff. you really hit the topic well here. i also thought you developed each character very effectively for how short each stanza was. impressive piece. mr. j - your approach is admirable. really focused into the characters mind. also some good mechanics. in the end i wanted a little more understanding, but i was satisifed and can say this was a good read. /v vulgar - i feel he hit the topic more efficiently, and i also enjoyed his verse a bit more.