Week 8 - Vulgar (3-2) vs. Mr. J (5-2) - VULGAR WINS 6-3

e11even · 11-18-2013, 01:55 AM

Vulgar- Well, Shit! This was an unorthodox, and intriguing read. Very off-the-beaten-path type of execution imo, and very well placed language, whereas nothing sounded tired or overused. Great underlying story, even though I believe the epilogue could have been worked in a little less obviously. That part kinda urked me. Besides that, awesome piece.

Mr. J- This was an inexplicable explosion of emotion I've never seen from you. This was very well written and much more fleshed out story-wise than what I thought you'd be decidedly capable of. I thought this echoed the topic spot-on and deserves a bigger backstory if it ever become an OM piece.

Overall both were great, but I was feeling Mr. J's more. MVGT Mr.J. Great job guys.

11-18-2013, 01:55 AM	#1
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Vulgar- Well, Shit! This was an unorthodox, and intriguing read. Very off-the-beaten-path type of execution imo, and very well placed language, whereas nothing sounded tired or overused. Great underlying story, even though I believe the epilogue could have been worked in a little less obviously. That part kinda urked me. Besides that, awesome piece. Mr. J- This was an inexplicable explosion of emotion I've never seen from you. This was very well written and much more fleshed out story-wise than what I thought you'd be decidedly capable of. I thought this echoed the topic spot-on and deserves a bigger backstory if it ever become an OM piece. Overall both were great, but I was feeling Mr. J's more. MVGT Mr.J. Great job guys. __________________ Ahem.