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sorry id idnt read your writing and adapt what you write to what i said before i said it to try and explain what i meant to fill a void you left out in your critique, very stupid of me
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Mad fucking dangerous.
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I'm just saying I don't care how you break up lines or even if you don't break up lines at all. But big words are hard to rhyme with sometimes because they are awkwardly pronounced. I like your writing and I liked this and I like your persona. Stop yelling at me.
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does it read better tho & thx i like u 2
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