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Old 11-14-2013, 02:25 AM   #201
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You're probably think of lomo saltado, stir-fried steak. That's good. But the chicken is ridiculous. Plus, I can get a half chicken and two heaping sides for $8.25 at my place.
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Old 11-14-2013, 02:46 AM   #202
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Yea I dated some peruvian chick way back and that's the only dish I remember lol
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Old 11-14-2013, 03:51 AM   #203
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Old 11-14-2013, 06:27 AM   #204
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i would penetrate her nostrils.
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Old 11-14-2013, 06:27 AM   #205
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oh and happy bday Pancake?
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Old 11-14-2013, 08:47 AM   #206
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you NEED stronger multis, mechanics, schemes...

Your style is often described as "poetic". This is true. However, the subliminal meaning behind this is that your style cannot be described as 'topical'. Oftentimes you rhyme a single syllable or heavily justify your rhymes with slants.... this is bad practice


quite frankly, you are a better writer than me. that is why you champed the RSTL or whatever it was called, and I did not.

however, us Netcees voters are obsessed with the idea of stylistic flair. If you cannot
a) give your verse an authorial voice
b) rhyme (heavily, and perfectly,for multiple syllables)
c) give your verse a unique and distinct take on the topic

Then you won't champ the league.



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Old 11-14-2013, 09:28 AM   #207
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Old 11-14-2013, 12:00 PM   #208
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OK, guys. This battle is excellent and has been open for almost 69 (heh) hours with only one vote:

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=31668

Knock out a vote!
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Old 11-14-2013, 02:14 PM   #209
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^that. Except don't vote with the same result as his, haha
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Old 11-14-2013, 03:22 PM   #210
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Old 11-14-2013, 03:23 PM   #211
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Old 11-14-2013, 03:31 PM   #212
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Sure, I don't mind or care. Maybe you'll motivate me to put some effort.
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Old 11-14-2013, 03:49 PM   #213
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Old 11-14-2013, 04:09 PM   #214
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Is this a $500 tournament? Oh wait....
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Old 11-14-2013, 04:19 PM   #215
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I care guys don't worry.
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Old 11-14-2013, 04:49 PM   #216
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Old 11-14-2013, 04:58 PM   #217
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Old 11-14-2013, 04:59 PM   #218
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Old 11-14-2013, 05:01 PM   #219
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Is this a $500 tournament? Oh wait....
Lmfao. I see what you did there.
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Old 11-14-2013, 05:01 PM   #220
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@Mike Wrecka I'm not sure if that sign in thread was for the current ongoing week or next week, but I'm in for whenever the next sht goes up, given I'm still breathing free air
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