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11-12-2013, 12:19 AM
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The Clown Prince
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This was pretty smooth a very different approach then your previous piece
I enjoyed a majority of this because of the flow the Kaufman drop was smooth the ending was smooth too I thought the saucer line was cool too...nice work V keep it up
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