Week 7 - symetrik (2-1) vs. ThisIsDam (0-0) - THISISDAM WINS 7-4

e11even · 11-11-2013, 01:37 AM

Sym- This was a solid and enjoyable effort. The story was beyond relatable, and your subject inclusion was slick. There were a few potholes, the last one most likely intentional, but overall a great read that I could resonate with. Well done.

Dam- Damn, Damn. This was tight, focused, and technically superb as far as rhyme mechanics. Your story went leaps and bounds, came off pretty damn complete, and left me with that "oh shit" at the end. I loved this verse.

Great battle guys. I am only slightly familiar with Sym, but I had no idea what kind of matchup this would be. I loved the take you both took on this. Sym- I felt the conviction and how you killed the topic, but the picture wasn't as fleshed out as I'd wanted. Dam- beyond solid execution and equally interesting spin of the topic. MVGT Dam Great job this week guys, and I hope you both show next week.

11-11-2013, 01:37 AM	#1
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Sym- This was a solid and enjoyable effort. The story was beyond relatable, and your subject inclusion was slick. There were a few potholes, the last one most likely intentional, but overall a great read that I could resonate with. Well done. Dam- Damn, Damn. This was tight, focused, and technically superb as far as rhyme mechanics. Your story went leaps and bounds, came off pretty damn complete, and left me with that "oh shit" at the end. I loved this verse. Great battle guys. I am only slightly familiar with Sym, but I had no idea what kind of matchup this would be. I loved the take you both took on this. Sym- I felt the conviction and how you killed the topic, but the picture wasn't as fleshed out as I'd wanted. Dam- beyond solid execution and equally interesting spin of the topic. MVGT Dam Great job this week guys, and I hope you both show next week. __________________ Ahem.