Week 7 - symetrik (2-1) vs. ThisIsDam (0-0) - THISISDAM WINS 7-4

Inno · 11-11-2013, 12:02 AM

dam.

welcome back man you still dropping heat my nigga..this was some cool ass storytelling man very fluid and each line seemed to transition the story along seamlessly. great storyline and concept to the topic..from beginning to end it was flawless in the scheme and flow..couple of cool lines through out the piece..very solid stuff man..welcome back.

sy.

I thought ths was fuck dope..the format the poetic feel, atless that's how I got the vibe..great storytelling..each stanza was strong and blended to each other well..the imagery you created was dope tho that was my favorite part of your writing, a lot if little small shit here and there ad really impressed me like the season thing..very cool and really played well with the topic.

overall i think ama give this to symetrik i thought his verse gell better to the topic at hand..i think the seasons thing did it for me..aside from the great language and fluidity of each stanza..

symetrik

11-11-2013, 12:02 AM	#12
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	dam. welcome back man you still dropping heat my nigga..this was some cool ass storytelling man very fluid and each line seemed to transition the story along seamlessly. great storyline and concept to the topic..from beginning to end it was flawless in the scheme and flow..couple of cool lines through out the piece..very solid stuff man..welcome back. sy. I thought ths was fuck dope..the format the poetic feel, atless that's how I got the vibe..great storytelling..each stanza was strong and blended to each other well..the imagery you created was dope tho that was my favorite part of your writing, a lot if little small shit here and there ad really impressed me like the season thing..very cool and really played well with the topic. overall i think ama give this to symetrik i thought his verse gell better to the topic at hand..i think the seasons thing did it for me..aside from the great language and fluidity of each stanza.. symetrik