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Mr. J
decent use of multi-syllabics, but there didn't seem to be a strong focus point that really attracted my devout attention. favourite lines: Quote:
great imagery and camera work (if you see what I mean), and although I didn't like the heavy focus on the beetles for the piece itself, I did like it for the topic, therefore it works. favourite lines: [qoute]The sparrow barrels in and pounds the suspenseful space, penetrating - less than ounce of aggressive rage.[/quote] Quote:
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