itt i tell you why you suck as a writer

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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

You are the exact opposite of the saying 'brevity is the soul of wit'. You use weird and complex language well and there are jewels in your verses but you're not confident enough to simply say what you're saying without fancying it up with Webster.com research.

Thanks, understood

Though all my language is organic/ home grown. I guess it does seem really stilted