Utmost vs. Malachi {Malachi wins}

[Jah Homie]

This was pretty close.

Originally Posted by Malachai

Your against the prophet, to beat him you need magic
You couldn't get Prop unless we're talking bout no.17, you faggot

This was probably the best line of the match. I think the verses need to be a bit more even and the end rhymes need work. However, the opener and closer both hit pretty hard. It warrants a second look sometimes to where you're headed with the punches. The concepts were on point and the personals were well illustrated

Originally Posted by Utmost.

YOU betta get vocal, yell for help or scream the lords name n' pray
Coz to win here, Ur gonna need Hush to break silence & God to be ya saving grace

I liked the personals and the meter and the rhyme. Again, these two verses are somewhat similar. I gotta give you props on trying to stretch as long as you did. The sloppy structure, with the use of heavy commas and periods in-verse, didn't work out. I think if the verses were rearranged they would flow a lot better.

These 2 was about equal, but Malachai started and closed better.


v/Malachai.