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Old 11-09-2013, 11:29 AM   #521
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Old 11-09-2013, 12:14 PM   #522
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Prove it.....

I gurantee you look twice as good in a thong, but there will be doubters. Show em Keith
I considered this for just .2 milliseconds... is that weird? :p
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Old 11-09-2013, 12:19 PM   #523
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Old 11-09-2013, 12:22 PM   #524
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@Diode and @breathless, be friends.

@Mike Wrecka, I'll clean that up if you want to use it.
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Old 11-09-2013, 12:23 PM   #525
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ya hook it up. that's dope
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Old 11-09-2013, 12:54 PM   #526
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NOW ACCEPTING FEEDBACK ON MY NO SHOW VERSE


I will

I need to get my 3 votes. In first

PM me tomorrow asking for feed and I got you

Also, the Open Mic here is fairly active. Posting there would get you at least 3 responses
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Old 11-09-2013, 12:57 PM   #527
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I didn't realize diode and I were being unfriendly to eachother... I was planning on giving his noshow piece some feed later lol
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Old 11-09-2013, 01:13 PM   #528
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I didn't realize diode and I were being unfriendly to eachother... I was planning on giving his noshow piece some feed later lol
HE THINK HE MEANT WE SHOULD BECOME FRIENDS BY LEAVING EACH OTHER FEEDBACK

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Old 11-09-2013, 03:15 PM   #529
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they had a surprisingly low number of deaths considering what ran through there. i was expecting indonesia 2.0.
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how far is your head up this girls vagina? seriously?
do you have a miners hat on? with a fancy light?
it must be narrow up there. cuz you're buried fairly deep in it.
no hate. all love. just saying.
He's head over heels. Her heels are probably over her head. Horizontal. Drake said, "talk about pussy power..."

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Dope. But why is wu tang popularity making a posthumous comeback?? Trends are weird these days.

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I'm going to stop posting links for my votes cool?

You keep deleting my sign in for my battles so I figure you don't care

Thanks
Thats actually annoying as hell. I bitched about it two weeks ago.

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On my way to get my read on.
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Old 11-09-2013, 03:24 PM   #530
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I just thought I'd say I'd shit on all of you in rock, paper, scissor. Because I'd literally hurl a rock at you of immense size, back slap your faces repeatedly with crumbled paper & surgically remove that thing which you all call a penis and then consummate with every whore in your families. Word.
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Old 11-09-2013, 03:45 PM   #531
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What does that mean? Is that disdain for the fact that I never really gave u the feed u wanted? I read writers/battles that intrigue me every week. I dont vote because ive been crucified for having such a harsh opinion so often. I dont care that youd rather have 1 more vote. Id rather be spared the scrutiny on the fact that most verses I read are verses ive read.

Im here @Split Eight because ive been mentioned several timws in this thread. If you don't like that im here ill make my presence unknown as most common. Pardon me.
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Old 11-09-2013, 03:47 PM   #532
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"caught up getting caught up with the homies" = sausage infested orgy.

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Old 11-09-2013, 03:52 PM   #534
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Split, you my nigga though... nigga. <3
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Dope. But why is wu tang popularity making a posthumous comeback?? Trends are weird these days.
Enter the Wu-Tang: 36 Chambers came out 20 years ago today, and next week will be Wu-Tang Clan week here.

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Thats actually annoying as hell. I bitched about it two weeks ago.
The fewer extraneous posts in a battle, in the early going particularly, the more obvious it will be that the battle needs votes. You're allowed to post in the battle at any point. It's actually easier to create a new post than to edit an old one. Y'all will find anything to bitch about.
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Old 11-09-2013, 05:12 PM   #536
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9-1 at this point last season , week 7

Damn , ive been fucking slacking
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Sorry for no-showing :( back in town for Veterans Day weekend and got caught up getting caught up with the homies
Then, why'd you even bother posting you were going to drop something and request an extension? Veterans day weekend don't last a week... Cmon man, I literally wrote mine in 2 hours. I'm thinking you read how amazing it was, and couldn't come up with anything that could beat it so you chose to noshow rather than get beat by a shitty newcomer...
All arrogance aside though, I still have mad respect for the talent of what I've read from you
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Old 11-09-2013, 05:54 PM   #538
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Guys I just took my niece to chuck e cheese for a late birthday present and ended up spending 70 dollars for two shitty pizzas and enough coins so that she was able to win a doll that is worth two dollars but costed 3000 tickets aka 30 fucking dollars...I need a fuckin joint.
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Old 11-09-2013, 06:04 PM   #539
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Guys I just took my niece to chuck e cheese for a late birthday present and ended up spending 70 dollars for two shitty pizzas and enough coins so that she was able to win a doll that is worth two dollars but costed 3000 tickets aka 30 fucking dollars...I need a fuckin joint.
At least you got some good fapping visuals
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Old 11-09-2013, 06:39 PM   #540
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@Mike Wrecka that was good analysis in your vote. The actual characterization/names of the two people were fictionalized, as was their meeting. I completely agreed with the fact this picture was hard to write for, I was stumped until the deadline. The 'Vulgar on the mind'/longer line criticism was spot on.
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