Week 6 - Mike Wrecka (2-3) vs. breathless (2-2) - BREATHLESS WINS 7-4

YDK · 11-04-2013, 02:30 AM

This was a good battle, breathless I thought you brought a unique style again man. The format was original and it still held a solid flow with multies scattered nicely. Wasn't really sure how the crossing streets landing tied in tho other than maybe a new course in life maybe?
Mw also a unique verse an metaphorically it was strong but literally I thought it was even better because of the humor aspect lol very smooth and well thought out piece with strong multies through out.
I gotta vote for Mike here for a bit more fluid verse and stronger in the metaphor department. Good battle guys

11-04-2013, 02:30 AM	#16
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	This was a good battle, breathless I thought you brought a unique style again man. The format was original and it still held a solid flow with multies scattered nicely. Wasn't really sure how the crossing streets landing tied in tho other than maybe a new course in life maybe? Mw also a unique verse an metaphorically it was strong but literally I thought it was even better because of the humor aspect lol very smooth and well thought out piece with strong multies through out. I gotta vote for Mike here for a bit more fluid verse and stronger in the metaphor department. Good battle guys __________________