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Old 11-02-2013, 10:57 PM   #401
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Everyone has fluctuations in creativity and interest. I usually just ride it out; write even if I don't want to, knowing I'm not going to post it on here. I have a bunch of bullshit verses in a notebook that I will never post here. I'll even start writing with a specific goal of just not stopping. As in, just writing a bunch of rhymes and lines non stop even if they don't make sense at all. I usually come out better for it. I would suggest reading a bunch of verses from people who everyone considers top tier (black, vulg, darth, dull, oats, etc.). A bunch of their pieces. Then parse out what you think makes them good and try to incorporate it into your writing. Not stealing their style, but making note of their qualities and meshing it with your own inherent way of writing.

Although there is something worthwhile in not writing at all, and just viewing life. Taking in what you see and letting creativity build. But I usually do the former.

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Old 11-02-2013, 11:07 PM   #402
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Will take that into consideration but truthfully I'm stuck. Don't know why I'm just STUCK. I don't know if u being authentic with me but I will bite anyway. Do I need to read more or something? I don't have any inspiration right now.
Yes, go to the library. Read a history book, preferably on a single topic like "The Proliferation of Oil." Then read 3 other books. Don't even pick them apart. Just read passages, skim. Just the good parts

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Old 11-02-2013, 11:10 PM   #403
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Old 11-02-2013, 11:20 PM   #404
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All great writers are readers first and foremost. At least this is what I'm told..
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Old 11-02-2013, 11:20 PM   #405
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Nonfiction seems like a bad point of inspiration as far as the actual use of language.
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Old 11-02-2013, 11:23 PM   #406
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You should have used it as a motivational tool to craft a unique take on your topic, not one completely out of field but one that makes the reader say 'Hmmm...interesting'. With strong non-standard rhyme structure and wording. I'm here to help.
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Watching alien files unlocked....I totally wanna write about aliens next lol
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Old 11-03-2013, 02:14 AM   #411
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Adonis-Zenland only has one vote: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=28471
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Old 11-03-2013, 07:08 AM   #413
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@YDK , the pics of your girl that you use as your avy are getting more and more provocative. you have to up the ante for the next one and do full frontal nudity. JS
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Old 11-03-2013, 12:19 PM   #414
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Lmao that's the last pic I got on this phone bruv all the good ones are on my old phone
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Old 11-03-2013, 12:51 PM   #415
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Got my votes in...will vote on the rest after work if possible
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Old 11-03-2013, 03:10 PM   #416
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Gen is drunk, you fagitts
Eyo.. let it be known, my every intention is to slay frank, and also.. slay mr.j in this mutha fuckah.... and take his champed fucking status , again. You remember.... the way I did in the nwl?. Ya


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12 is not Mr. J

billy 12 and Mr. J are complete opposites. I will never believe it in a million years
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Billy 12 wanted to be me and Charles Hamilton
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Guys, I know it's long, but Frank-YDK reallllllly needs votes.

Also, Write Night tonight if anyone wants in.
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