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Old 10-30-2013, 12:17 AM   #1
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Ever since ATR was founded activity's dropped,
so we can deduce Geno's mission got sidetracked, flopped.
I rarely beef with peeps, but that shit was weak as fuck,
you resurrected nothing but MW's ego as if he's that hot?
Now you resign from OM cuz no-one gives a shit 'bout your highschool club,
And the only thing you really did was siding with that douchebags cock.
Frankly I don't care that you kicked me out... The crews a Wreck
with a fake dude up front .. both of you need a reality check.
And that comes from the batshit insane member with the dysthymia seal,
so you can talk shit and diss me, but at least I've always been real.
I wouldn't have joined if I knew backstabbing was part of the deal,
you're nothing but a pathetic fuck with writtens only people on Netcees will feel.
So keep talking smack, I've said mine, and Wrecka is a soft shook kid,
dude aint even got balls to talk 'bout writing that stupid ass children book shit.
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Old 10-30-2013, 12:22 AM   #2
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Not good. Sorry. Being less emotional will help you on this matter.

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Old 10-30-2013, 12:28 AM   #3
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Not good. Sorry. Being less emotional will help you on this matter.

Take your time.
Haha, ye, you're right. Dissverses and battling has never been anything I've been good at anyways so I didn't really mind posting some rushed shit. I had to respond with something and spending days doing that is not something I usually do. But I couldn't NOT respond. I expect Geno and MW to keep firing at me, but as far as I'm concerned I'm done with the whole thing. Probably comes off as more emotional than it is tho'.
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Old 10-30-2013, 12:48 AM   #4
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Old 10-30-2013, 12:30 PM   #5
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Ether.
Shouldn't have poured it on yourself though.
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yo...this was pathetic, really isnt no other word for it.

i dont say that to shoot you down, just a reality check, & wise ways pretty much told you what the deal...kind of. i'd say its the type of emotion, the type that gotchu coming off bitch basically. like that crew shit really cut that deep? i mean really? ask yourself

anyway, thats what it is,
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you struck last & struck weaker than i honestly never knew was capable

offended? i usually dont intend it, but reading this shit was offensive...& not in a good way so fuck it, take it how it was meant
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Old 11-01-2013, 11:56 PM   #7
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My momma always said if you can't say anything nice then don't say anything at all, so

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Old 11-03-2013, 12:12 PM   #8
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lmfao @Rugged, Im not offended at all. Honesty > anything else, keep doing you. It might come off as something else, but I don´t really care that much to being kicked out of ATR, didn´t happen much there anyways that I could grow on that I can´t do anywhere else so it wasn´t a loss to me. They dissed me and I just felt like writing something and posted it without reading too much into it, it is what it is. And if you wasted your time reading garbage; my bad, I´ll do better next time. Either way; thanks for checking it out and feeding it.

@breathless: Shut the fuck up faggot.

Edit: For real tho Breathless; Thanks for checking it out and leaving some words.
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@breathless: Shut the fuck up faggot.

Edit: For real tho Breathless; Thanks for checking it out and leaving some words.
Not a prob, I meant it, like, I really didn't want to drown you in criticism, but yea, respect for dropping this, I've had my emotional shitposts as well. If this was like, legit, face to face between you guys it wouldn't have been too bad, but given that its written, this should've been polished a bit. Came off as more of a public "fuck you guys" than a legit attempt to show superiority.
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Came off as more of a public "fuck you guys" than a legit attempt to show superiority.
Word, definitely feel what you're saying. No need to be afraid of drowning me in criticism, it´s what I learn the most from because it isn't cluttered (in lack of a better word) with positive comments in between to detract all of my focus from the shit I really need to work on. It´s when certain things in a verse gets mentioned from several people I understand what I need to work on first anyways.

I definitely need to work on diss/battle-verses, not because it´s what I really want to write but to make myself a better overall writer. Might even sign into the NBL or something. Thanks for being 100%, see ya around.
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