11-02-2013, 11:47 AM | #381 | |
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Woke up today even more hungover, now this girl wants her $5 cat costume back. Lol ok Just feeling NEGATIVE man. Probably just stress.
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11-02-2013, 11:59 AM | #382 |
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all the verses that got no showed were dope. going to do an in depth break down of each for the next mag. props to those who showed.
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11-02-2013, 12:33 PM | #383 |
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@Mr. J @Vividlyvague , the title match has ended. Mr. J wins by DQ for going over the line limit.
remember people if you want to go over the line limit your opponent must agree. it is posted in every battle thread.
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11-02-2013, 12:39 PM | #384 |
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And when your opponent says in his check-in that he doesn't want to allow it, that's probably a pretty good indication that he isn't going to sign off on it.
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11-02-2013, 12:42 PM | #385 |
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That's a damn shame. Was really looking forward to that battle. Congrats though Mr J. But I'll take that title from you in a few weeks. It's time for a more focused Zen to take this league by storm.
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11-02-2013, 01:18 PM | #386 |
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Its cool. Didn't have the time to think of a shorter way to write it. My imagination is long winded. Congrats @Mr. J we are 1-1. Maybe one day we'll have a tie-breaker.
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11-02-2013, 03:37 PM | #387 |
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I've been pretty lucky with my no-show wins. Both have been verses that I rushed and came away pretty unsatisfied with. Win's a win I guess.
Voting now.
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11-02-2013, 04:00 PM | #388 | |
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I love this post bro Get that fire and burn it like a pipe son
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lol^
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Me and zen would love to feed ur pipe with cali's finest
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11-02-2013, 08:48 PM | #393 |
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11-02-2013, 09:31 PM | #394 |
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My bad folks I'm trying to get the spark back. The excitement ain't what it used to be but I refuse to let this love die. I'm thinking some s&m would help. Don't know tho.
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Kiss my ass brah
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You should have used it as a motivational tool to craft a unique take on your topic, not one completely out of field but one that makes the reader say 'Hmmm...interesting'. With strong non-standard rhyme structure and wording. I'm here to help.
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Will take that into consideration but truthfully I'm stuck. Don't know why I'm just STUCK. I don't know if u being authentic with me but I will bite anyway. Do I need to read more or something? I don't have any inspiration right now.
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