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ghost in the matrix
Join Date: Apr 2013
Location: Covington, KY
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Lol this was a dope ass short battle. Zyg you came with the standard approach probably the route I would have taken. Flowed well and nice depth and use of contrast but I felt it lacked much originality it terms of an ending. Strong drop with a blah ending.
Diode you had the short lines which I was skeptical about but after reading it all really flowed well and held a cool but cliche story...until the end. Def did not expect r Kelly at the end lmao both drops were short and sweet but I felt diode brought a refreshing take on it. good shit guys but my vote goes to diode
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