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Old 10-31-2013, 12:08 AM   #4
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nor was it particularly interesting imo.. which perhaps may only be my opinion...
don't look back, i got your back, bro! i mean i share your view///

True wit is nature to advantage dressed:
What oft was thought, but never so well expressed


idk couplets bother me a bit. not even couplets, probably... not counting. it's like wow diversify.

concept was cool. writing was inanimate. ironic?! NOT rain on your wedding day. what a stupid bitch she was. basically: your writ felt like it was trying to be didactic, but belonging to a teacher i wouldn't willingly listen to//doodle stuff on my palm when they spoke.
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