Week 5 - Mike Wrecka (1-3) vs. Adonis (2-1) - MIKE WRECKA WINS 7-6

Inno · 10-27-2013, 11:18 PM

Tough

On one hand mike setvthe scene and imagery very nicely. While still
Maintaining a story that progressed well. Language was bumpy here and
There..could of used more range with your wording..but thats just me.

On the other hand adonis set the mood with raw emotion and a great
Poetic tone. Imagery wasnt far behind and his story held its own aswell.
Dope concept tbh..great creativity shown there. .always dig your angles.

Overall.

I got adonis...thought bringing out emotion makes sense...red..rage...its emotion
Great concept and angle....mike dropped fire but Adonis burned it down.

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10-27-2013, 11:18 PM	#1
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Tough On one hand mike setvthe scene and imagery very nicely. While still Maintaining a story that progressed well. Language was bumpy here and There..could of used more range with your wording..but thats just me. On the other hand adonis set the mood with raw emotion and a great Poetic tone. Imagery wasnt far behind and his story held its own aswell. Dope concept tbh..great creativity shown there. .always dig your angles. Overall. I got adonis...thought bringing out emotion makes sense...red..rage...its emotion Great concept and angle....mike dropped fire but Adonis burned it down. Ad