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10-26-2013, 12:29 PM
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The Throne, The Crown
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 2,667
Battle Record: 21-35
Rep Power: 1932963   |
The Zenmaster is beginning to break out of that shell. This was dope for some random shit. There were two lines that threw off the flow because of too much wording & you kind of trailed off in the end with it as well, but I enjoyed the content very much. The opening line to the pastor/bastard part really jumped this off. You're starting to excel which is also showing in your AOWL pieces, too. Props, homie.
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