"You Aside" - Feat. Namix

Sn00p · 02-19-2013, 12:39 AM

I don't really know why this hasn't gotten more feed. Dope work, @Lars and @namix. Contrasting styles and formats that blended together quite well. I loved all the subtle references and wordplay. Maybe you could've been even more subtle with it and left out the opener? That way, you'd have left us guessing a bit more. Well, anyways, this created a mood quite well and you stayed on topic without getting repetitive. It transferred a feeling well, too. Good work.

namix · 02-19-2013, 03:00 AM

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Originally Posted by Sn00p

I don't really know why this hasn't gotten more feed. Dope work, @Lars and @namix. I loved all the subtle references and wordplay. Maybe you could've been even more subtle with it and left out the opener?

that's a great recommendation sn00p! tbh, it became a comic book theme drop after we decided to collab -- so it was just good allusion from baron that i decided to hone in on too once i saw his verses --- but your 1000% right that, in retrospect, it'd be that much more impactful if we even removed the words "Marvel comics were where it started".

good feedback bro -- and thanks a lot for peeping

02-19-2013, 12:39 AM	#1
Sn00p General German Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 1,988 Battle Record: 26-12 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Line4Line Cypher Tourney - Back2Basics - Fight Night XLVI Rep Power: 15213753	I don't really know why this hasn't gotten more feed. Dope work, @Lars and @namix. Contrasting styles and formats that blended together quite well. I loved all the subtle references and wordplay. Maybe you could've been even more subtle with it and left out the opener? That way, you'd have left us guessing a bit more. Well, anyways, this created a mood quite well and you stayed on topic without getting repetitive. It transferred a feeling well, too. Good work.