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02-18-2013, 04:03 PM
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Om
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culture's built around a golden age whose yellow details stain every fresh page, the phenomenon of lies we've accepted with praise, quotes- the lexicon for conveying cliches,
^^^ There are a lot of kick ass lines like this, but I'm not comprehending the theme well. The structure seemed awkward at first, but after a few reads through, i like it.
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